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Posted: Wed, 22nd Sep 2004, 3:36pm

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Info: This took 1 year to finish, lol, i know i have been talking about it, but its finally here. We had a really hard time filming, becuase of school, and the fact that we never wrote a script. you can tell a huge difference in between the fist, second and third part, being that we grew up and look older, and the camera shots got better.
also in the 2nd and 3rd part thier are NCC smoke packs, i did not know how to use them in the second part, but in the third part i found out how to make them look good, thanks to Canta.

Story:This is about a man by the name of Mike johnson, he makes a deal selling Goverment codes to a guy by the name of Jason Barker AKA bad guy. These codes allow to have accsess to any goverment bank account. Jason Barker kills Mike johnson for the plans and uses them to start or provoke WW3. 10 years pass and Mike Johnson's son Grows up to seek Revenge on his Fathers Death, but Thier was more going on than just a death, a deal.
Will Jake johnson beable to stop Jason Barker? find out..........

Thanks to: Fxhome community & Effects, Rawree, Canta, Serpent for hosting, Sollthar for Smoke pack.
Thanks guys, and enjoy.
PS: entering this one in a film Festival. Wish me luck!


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Posted: Wed, 22nd Sep 2004, 5:13pm

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Rating: +1

It took some thinking, man, but this deserves a good rating. Your filmmaking skills have drastically improved, and I'm proud of you for it. Well done. I love your fighting style and choreography. I originally wanted to give this a 3, not having seen the other parts. The only thing that really bothered me in part 2 and 3 was the acting. However, I liked the way you ended it, and the musical score was awesome. Part 1, 3. Part 2, 4. Part 3, 5. (unless you've changed it since I've watched it before it's release on here) Overall, probably just over a four. But, I gave you the benefit of the rating system, and gave you a 5. Cool flick, and probably your best. (Screw those GirlBoy guys, aaron! Go with your own style, 'cause it's pretty cool.) smile


5
Posted: Wed, 22nd Sep 2004, 6:54pm

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Rating: +1

I liked it. It definitely got better as the parts went on. Sometimes it didn't make sense to me, like how if this guy's giving countries money, it'll start world war 3? Hmm. Ok. And the acting was shaky sometimes. But it really worked for the CIA guys. When they first came to the door, and said "CIA!" that was awesome.

I give it a 4.
Posted: Wed, 22nd Sep 2004, 8:07pm

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I try to watch it, but it keeps crashin on me. The 1st one froze and crashed on me about 4 min into it and so did the 2nd part...
Posted: Wed, 22nd Sep 2004, 8:33pm

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That was great, your skills are definately improving. The sound could have used more work though, sound effects were sometimes missing or not meant to be there, and try to work on using only one music, or two.

Choreography was awesome, however. I was quite impressed.

Oh and You seem to have a thing for copying other people's credits biggrin

Overall, a 4
Posted: Wed, 22nd Sep 2004, 11:10pm

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Rating: +1

It was awesome, entertaining, and effort put into it. Cool foghts, props. spund, effects, story, acting, movie. But my hosting skills overcame it all. biggrin 6/5 er wait, I guess just a 5, there are no sixes. That's on my top 10 movies on fxhome. Good job.
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 12:00am

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thanks guys, hopefully more people post.
thanks
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 12:43am

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I really liked this movie. I saw it last night when slick (secretly) slipped me the links wink

Really great. By far your best that I've seen anyway. Good luck with the film festival, I would bet you would get some sort of award for that.

It kind of reminds me of a mix of Pharmacide, Adrenaline, and Girl(Boy) but with an actual story smile

5 from me.
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 1:01am

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A 5 for me

Marek - I asked Aaron if I could first. razz
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 1:02am

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Ga-DANG! Man was that cool. 367/5. Oh wait, the rating system doesn't work that way. 5/5. Awesome dude. Like I said in a previous post, I loved your promo- didn't much like homesick, kinda stupid- and I felt this MORE than lived up to it. You may want to consider re-grading part one, as the grading on parts two and three varies a little too much for my liking. I know the camera and/or quality and/or other stuff may be different in part one, but thats just a thought. Also, while the titles at the end are awesome, some of them are unreadable because of the white titles on a higher exposed clip. Maybe darken the credits just a little. This is total pimpness, man. Now stop reading this post and go outside with your family and finish "Dusk"!
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 1:39am

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ssjaaron all I've seen from you dude is some crazy work. I always enjoy your stunts...but this peice of work really demonstrate your editing skills, cinematography, and acting skills. This is definitly your best peice of work and it shows you've but a great deal of time into. For your age your climbing the ladder quite well. All I can say is keep up and I look forward to seeing more productions done by you as time goes on.

Lovin it, 4/5
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 2:36am

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I am quickly becoming a fan of yours and from the posts so far I cant WAIT to see this biggrin

but yeah I cant watch it yet...gotta go...best luck!
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 9:50am

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Rating: +1

While watching the 3 clips I took some notes, So I'll coment clip by clip to begin with what needed some work and what cought my attention!

Part1
1.The gun looked very easy when he put it down his pants, tell the actors that that is a very dangerous and heavy gun smile
2.Do you actully walk on the bag like that guy do? When he didnt take time saying anything and beeing very very cool,
do you think he would consider walking on the badguys bag?
3.Okey, not sure about this, but it made me think, so if someone actully know the answer let me know,
if you got shot, do you get blod in your mouth and on your teeth right after?
4.The titles didn't look to good, felt like you were trying to get your 2D to 3D!
5. at "10 years later" you looked to much at the background instead of the actors, you really needed some light there!

This parts orgasm thing: Explotion!
This parts great thing: Fight!


Part2
1.Opening here is much better. Some backlight problem at first but when he get down by the stairs, better look at it.
2.The son-dad sequence had great acting, First then I could actully imagine he being as old as the characher was.
3. I was kinda suprised that you didnt dressed the CIA with sunglasses, good choise! wink
4.Editing where someone shots the guard should have been much slicker!
5.The gun fight was great, there could have been a bit tighter editing. What I really missed in this scene was sound,
it could have turned out SO much better with more sound. This Part overall missed sound effects, but had much better camera work!

This parts great thing: Son at the fence!

Part3
1.Opening here is even better, great music, great look, acting, editing, camerawork.
2.The hacking parts music choice, I love it! It's the best through out the movie!!
3.Still backlighting problem when you get outside.. hrmm
4.The fight is great!

This parts orgasm thing/s: whole part.


Overall
I think you manged to do something great, this opened up my eyes for you much more.
It's like, whenever Sollthar, Aculag or the Twisted guys put up something, you download it at the moment you see it in the cinema, your close to that now!
You've done a 20 minute action piece of a couple of agent 15 years to young to play the parts and kept it intresting all the way through, not many can do that here.
First I though that you really need to work on the look of your video, start lighten it at first, spice it up with more colors, But since this is a years project you can really see that you've become so much better in part3.
Part3 here is among the best on this site, but it wouln't be that great without Part 1 and 2 that build up this story very well.
What can I say, You really suprised me with this, its really good, it kept me infront of the computer all the time, the last part I didn't even had time to take notes.
Increasing the amature film quality of the cinema!
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 11:47am

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Very very cool! smile gave you a 5 and added it to my favorites! smile

and I can't say anything that others haven't already said, so I'll just say...

Too Cool! Great job! smile
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 4:32pm

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Good job!!! Very solid movie. Fighting was cool. Acting was soso. Nice editing. All around great job!!! 5/5
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 4:40pm

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Your short was more ambitious than most. You had to coordinate a lot of talent, props, and locations...well done. The fight scenes seemed the most professional.

I struggled at times to hear the dialog. The edit where the son is suddenly behind a screen fence was confusing since we had last seen him watching his father walk down the sidewalk. There were other small editing problems.

I'm giving this a 4 because of its scope and ambition and the better than usual fight choreography.
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 6:20pm

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the kid, that was watching though the fence (Jake Johnson as a kid) he was watching the transaction at the top of the bridge, he followed his dad. that is why i made the audio from that scene come in when is dad is changing.
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thanks for the comments
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 7:20pm

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Great job on the movie. As said, well done fight scenes. Acting was good overall. There were some plot holes but considering you didn't write a script, it pulled together well. Well done!
Posted: Thu, 23rd Sep 2004, 10:12pm

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I love this film!! very great job smile 5/5
what is the name of the music in the end of the first part?

Good luck with the film festival biggrin
Posted: Fri, 24th Sep 2004, 1:22am

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Just a note:

Try to change up your background scenary a small bit more. I like the transition between scenary, but almost all the exterior shots are introduced with a shot of the mountains. I felt this took away from the film a tiny bit, because it kind of obviously stated: "We live in Utah!" But it's okay. It's like some of my films. One shot of a cow and everybody is like: "Yee-Ha! Texas! Ride em' cowboy!" lol Nah, I just wanted to know how you prep your fight scenes. They looked "unrehearsed" in a GOOD way, not like you guys knew every next move that came after you, which I liked. Do you study any kind of combat? I'm guessing yes, because your fighting style is like "HOLY CRAP!" smile
Posted: Fri, 24th Sep 2004, 9:11am

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I watched your movie with great interest and came out with very good opinion of your work. I thinj that you'll achieve good results in the film festival. One thing I would like to know, what are those smoke plugins called and from where did you get them?
Posted: Fri, 24th Sep 2004, 1:00pm

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What is the name of the music in the end of the first part? I know its used in MI:2.

By the way, your movie was great! I really enjoyed it!
Posted: Fri, 24th Sep 2004, 1:00pm

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Those are the Almighty Sollthar's smoke plugins. They're called NCC (NoControlCinema) Smoke Packs, and they're 32 bucks on his website.
Posted: Fri, 24th Sep 2004, 1:15pm

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and the song is called Interjection wink
Posted: Fri, 24th Sep 2004, 2:54pm

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hippa03 wrote:

I watched your movie with great interest and came out with very good opinion of your work. I thinj that you'll achieve good results in the film festival. One thing I would like to know, what are those smoke plugins called and from where did you get them?
haha, it took this to give you a good opinion? have you seen his other stuff? this young man clearly stands out in his age group!
Posted: Fri, 24th Sep 2004, 3:07pm

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Buuut he still copies other people's opening credits biggrin
Posted: Fri, 24th Sep 2004, 5:23pm

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Finaly a long awaited full movie form aaron.

PROS
- Very quick intro, this in my opinion was excellent. It got you straight into the world of the movie, and effectively established the plot.

- Nice variety of locations, again the begining scene was awesome. The warehouse was neat too. For those who can see past the younger actors, I think it was gripping and really exciting.

- Some really neat moves in the fight scenes. Although I think perhaps you overdid it in some cases.

- Effects were in general really good, but I don't know why you used CG blood for the begging shot. Why not get a bowl of tomato ketchup and lob it at the ground (the ketchup not the bowl) It didn't look too real sad

CONS
- I think that you could have cleaned up the audio in your film, especially when the characters aren't talking. Removing the noise, even by simply silencing clips, can give a much more professional impression. This was the first thing that came to my mind, simply as there was loads of noise (as in camera reeling) in the first shot. Even if you don't want to do this for the whole film, it helps with the opening. Try also adjusting stuff to glaze up the film, such as making it a bit darker, changing the colours etc (I know you did a lot of this in Part 3)

- It's always good to try and find some of your own music. I recognized the majority of your tunes from other movies on and not on fxhome.com
The music you used in your trailer was awesome though, maybe try using some fresh sounds that we haven't all heard before.

- The CIA team cracked me up. I think a bit of realism would help. It just seemed really fake. "I don't think so" and then he just walks off with them. Try to make it as real as possible.

- Effects were in general good, but some stood out. I think the bluescreen bit in the warehouse was a good attempt, but I personally would have left it out. I understand you can't just "go back" and film in a hired warehouse, but tests help you decide on location whether you want to take a risk.

Improvements

I've mentioned many above, but I think some more cleanly executed special (ie non digital) effects and stunts could be in the film. Stunts are always a good way to grip an audience, and create that "wow" impression. Also of course, try to master digital effects a bit more. Doing tests really really helps. Other than polishing your final footage, I think your next installation could be really promising, especially looking at your trailer.

Conclusion
A mind-blowing barrel of a film, loaded to the top with rich action and impressive effects.
Posted: Fri, 24th Sep 2004, 8:16pm

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Wow, this movie was SO awesome. Great story, amazing fights, I loved this one. 5/5 from me.
Posted: Sat, 25th Sep 2004, 9:21am

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Alright, as most of you know, im not a fan of overly-dramatic scripts played out by teenagers. Especially when it involves someones family member getting killed and revenge having to be taken. This storyline has been done so many times, it almost boggles my mind. A couple things come to mind when i watched this.

Do hitmen always have to wear black?
Do CIA scenes always have to involve headsets and computers?
does every "agent" type of person know martial arts (even though no backround info has been shown on the person)
Has anyone on here ever fired any type of gun? recoil is nothing like that.
At this point, warehouses have now become near-parody, thanks to there overuse.



So, this being said, heres the laundry list.

Good:
fight scenes, bullet CG, Some acting, The house explosion, sound effects, editing.

The Bad: weapon handling, cg blood, the rest of the acting, costumes, locations, the fact that the explosion would have melted the skin right off lead characters bones during the house explosion.

The ugly: The storyline, All CIA scenes, Ridiculously outlandish scenes, example being that they would suddenly take off there jackets to fight, the foot gun-takeaway, the greenscreen mi2 knockoff, the lack of dramatic cinematography to corrispond with the drama-heavy script.

I suppose i could add more, but its quite late and i need to get up tommorow to continue shooting a movie. You'll obviously get much better with practices, as your early submissions dont suck as much as most.
Posted: Sat, 25th Sep 2004, 11:35am

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Firstly, congratulations on making a plot driven movie. Sure there were some holes as others have stated, but the fact that you worked on putting together a movie that has a beginning, middle and end, rather than just a sequence is to be applauded.

It's evident that you put a great deal of thought into what you wanted to portray, and though it didn't always hit the mark, the overall effect was very good.

I liked the whole scope of the movie, and only found a couple of areas that distracted. The martial arts fights were mainly good but seemed a little repetitive, and my pet hate is people holding guns on there sides whilst shooting. These are minor quibbles in a generally solid film.

Ambition is great and from watching 'K-text' it's evident that you have an abundance of it. Congrat's again and keeping kicking ass!

Mantra
Posted: Sat, 25th Sep 2004, 2:56pm

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Yeah I must admit I don't really get alot of it. The film just seemed to skim across the top of the plot as oppose to feeling like they were intertwined. The total lack of character was also a let down. As was the cliched dialogue and clunky set-ups through this fairly routine revenge thriller. (Is it just me who's fed up by revenge stories anyway?)

The first part suffered strongly from bad camera work, (crossing the line etc) and a lack of conviction, no one really looked comfortable and seemed to not know what they were doing, and the gun seemed very fake too. The acting was also at a low point here ("I need more information" "What kind of information?" "More information on... my fathers... death" indeed) It's probably just me but I had no idea where they were supposed to be, why they were meeting and what was that case with the sticker marked "C4" doing there (incidentally C4 cannot be detonated by a bullet hitting it.) I wasn't too keen on the big explosion, I'd have liked something less computery looking. For people who obviously have such enthusiasm for action I'd expect you to keep away from the cliched killer holds gun on hero and stands there not doing anything waiting for the hero comes up with a good idea to turn the tables.

I liked the way the light came blasting in through the windows, and some effort made on costumes, props and locations. That first place was great. The action scenes were well above average, they seemed like they belonged in an "Operation Delta Force" movie. I like the stunts like the two guys falling over the setee and the dude flying through the door onto the snow (though he was wearing white shirt lying in snow, you missed a great blood chance.) the falling over and sliding along the floor or hitting something heavy or both was overused, but you can't really have too much of something that fun.

Part Two was very much an improvement. I like the lying in rubble stuff. Good to see an actual establishing shot. I liked the staggering home thing, that was a great touch that many people would have missed out on and it added a slightly more human aspect to it. The flashback was the best bit, the B&W really worked, it seemed much more genuine than anything else in there, the only relationship and heart in the entire piece. The acting improved hugely and it actually seemed way more professional than anything else like it could have appeared in a "real" film, the music was good, I like the over exposed shot when he walks through the door. It was just filled with details like the glove that just come out of nowhere but add the whole extra dimension and most people here would have missed the oppurtunity to put them in (I go out of my way to think up little things like that to put in, that no one'll notice, but they kind of add something, it's quite difficult to remember to use them.) costumes and stuff all good again. The kid looking through the fence was the best shot in the whole film (though if he could hear them talking that loudly, surely the gnshot would be much louder than that, it was the quietest sound in it.) The dream type sequence was good, but the CIA part didn't really work for me, just no one looked slightly convincing and the authority was laboured, good split screen though and the next est, shot was great too. The CIA HQ just was too unreal. Liked the table of guns and the gunfight that followed was the action highlight, great stunt work like the falling off the thing, then cutting to the guy rolling. Lots of good reactions, it really seemd like a proper C-movie or something, I kept on expecting Gary Daniels to run in. The following fight was good, but I don't understand what the point of the guy in the mask was. The flying through the air I didn't like even worse than the jumping out of an exploding building shot in part one.

Part three seemed rushed, like it was just trying to get to the ending as soon as possible (kind of like me writing this review), hurrying through exposition (which is no bad thing, it just seemed like you got bored) The last fight looked great in tems of location and camera, very rich looking shots, and the fight itself was great, just didn't offer anything you hadn't already done, however it was still good. Though if he's shot everyone who came near him trying to get to the bad guy, then doesn't shoot the bad guy, it seemed to undermine the whole point of the film. He was looking for revenge for twenty minutes then couldn't be bothered, so what was the point.

Overall it was an entertaining film, with some great looking moments of near pro standard. Clearly alot of effort and talent went into this, it just wasn't involving in the slightest, just a cool film to coast along too. 4
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I don't normally download movies that have been for no good reason other than to irritate me have been seperated into 3 (or sometimes more) downloads. But after seeing all the ruckus I thought I may as well, although I really must emphasise that a movie should be a flowing piece as a pose to cut up by several downloads.

Still, I believe this to be your best movie to date, even if it has parts which are just total ripoffs of MechaForce and Sidewinder's work, and though even though at these parts they provided the ideas and inpsiration, You still carried them out and edited them pretty effectively.

I'm gonna skip plot holes/bad acting and say that they're just a part of every amateur film (well, most). I do feel however, that you could have improved K-Text by improving your editing just slightly.

In the first part, at 4:09 minutes I can hear someone say "Action", as far as that goes, that pretty much ruins the make believe world your film is creating, if that makes sense. There are other similiar small errors but nothing major.

Right now to my main gripe about K-Text; The music.
For someone who has kept it no secret that they are a big fan of twisted studios, I was amazed that you didn't seem to make any great effort with the music. Transitions between songs are done better by my iTunes, you had a few "track changes" just mid scene where nothing on camera was really representing any need for a change. On top of this you used pretty much everything from Fight Club to Metal Gear Solid to other well known rock artists which is a luxury you won't have if you ever plan on releasing any work on DVD to sell, using well known themes or tracks tends to cheapen your film overall as well.

My suggestion is that you go back and watch DXM and listen to the music, the music track itself is telling the story, action and musical "stabs" are timed for added effect. Right now your audio editing makes your video editing look great, as it is pretty abysmal unsure

This film is a good attempt, and a good use of plot. Keep it up, I expect that with a few improvements we may start to see some exciting stuff coming from you, or atleast I hope.
Posted: Sat, 25th Sep 2004, 5:47pm

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I noticed the music in DXM too. Whenever I hear the song the Grudge, I am thinking of all the parts of the movie, and what's happening. Like that Overture of 1812 song about Napolean.
Posted: Sat, 25th Sep 2004, 7:57pm

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using well known themes or tracks tends to cheapen your film overall as well.
Quote of the year, If I could tell my god damn friend this our films might improve slightly. He wanted to use ACDC Back In Black in the opening credits. sad
Posted: Sun, 26th Sep 2004, 12:18am

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This movie definitley had its good and bad moments.

The Good:
-Props were fine, like the guns and clothes
-Hand to hand fighting was awesome
-Music itself was good
-Cool storyline
-Flashback in part 2 was amazing. Good acting and when he opens the door and the light shines in, that was awesome.

The Bad:
-Horrible Acting, everyone was im sorry to say terrible. The main character seemed to get a little bit better as the movie went along and the guy in the black mask was alright to, but other than that...
-Sound Editing was not good. The music was good, however the songs changed in the middle of a scene which sounded odd. Also sometimes the sound would go silent for a scene change or a music change which also took away from it all. I didn't like the gun sfx at all or the bullet richochets. The action that saves the movie is the kung fu fighting.
-Effects were good here and there however the gun effects werent to good. For example in the wharehouse scene the kid whos with the main character has an m4a1 it looks like and the muzzle flashes are really big and light blue. I don't recall seeing a gun with blue muzzle flashes.

Other than that though I'm sure this took effort and it was cool to watch. In your next movie try and focus on more kung fu type scenes, because that seems to be your strong point. With my friends and I its the opposite, and we'll stick to guns and effects. Good job, a 3.
Posted: Sun, 26th Sep 2004, 2:05am

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the guy in the black mask was alright to,
lol. That's him. smile

EDIT: I'm sorry, I might be missing this, because there was stuff going on around me while I was watching it, but I didn't hear any music from DXM, and even if so, that doesn't mean that he can't use it. Granted, it takes away from the film in some way, but overall it's not that big of a deal. Aaron, is there a trailer for this, and are you making a DVD of it? If so, pm me the cover art.
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It'd be illegal for him to make a DVD and sell it because he used copyrighted music.
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pooky wrote:

It'd be illegal for him to make a DVD and sell it because he used copyrighted music.
And the "Twisted Studios" DVD would be what.....?


Nah, I'm fairly certain that if he "gifts" it to me, and I make a "donation" to his company, I can avoid any "legal" mumbo jumbo. Nah, j/k. Just wanted to see his DVD cover art if he made one.

http://www.copyright.gov/title17/ for your convenience, pooky. smile
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The acting wasn't terrible. The little kid was pretty good and so was the main character. It's hard to come by even potential good actors when you just use friends.
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Im going to go ahead and say that the acting DID infact suck. If its any comfort, the filtering was decent. And, after reading about the sound editing, i realized that it was quite crappy. Of course, everyone is entitled to his opinion, but it will still be wrong. biggrin
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"it has parts which are just total ripoffs of MechaForce and Sidewinder's work"

Which parts do you mean? I can't remember any bits like that.
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atom wrote:

pooky wrote:

It'd be illegal for him to make a DVD and sell it because he used copyrighted music.
And the "Twisted Studios" DVD would be what.....?
Illegal?
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Two_Gunned saint wrote:

"it has parts which are just total ripoffs of MechaForce and Sidewinder's work"
The gunfight in the barn type area :
http://fxhome.com/cinema/info_cache/movieinfo592.html

The flashback with lots of glow :
http://fxhome.com/cinema/info_cache/movieinfo708.html

You'd have to watch the DVD to spot some other small copies or "direct influences". I wasn't really stating this as a negative anyway, I'm sure ssjaron openly admits that Twisted Studios are an influence in his films.
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yes twisted studios influenced me, and they probebly influence alot of you. ok i think i may just take k-text of this site. it first got good ratings, and now people are saying the same thing, and they are things i already menchend in the submission. guys Guess what i know i did not have good actors, becuase they are my friends, what a suprize!
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ssjaaron wrote:

yes twisted studios influenced me, and they probebly influence alot of you. ok i think i may just take k-text of this site. it first got good ratings, and now people are saying the same thing, and they are things i already menchend in the submission. guys Guess what i know i did not have good actors, becuase they are my friends, what a suprize!
If I were you I'd leave it here, everyone including me has given you a good rating. Surely this is the kind of work you'd be proud of associating yourself with?
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"The gunfight in the barn type area "

I'm guessing our definitions of rip-off differ. 'cos I can't see any thing directly lifted in the shootouts, there fairly average shootouts with not much that hasn't been done a thousand times before, people shoot, people fall over. I can see the influence but not the rip-off.

And the flashbacks were of fairly different subject matter, so I dont really class that as a rip-off. Influenced: yes, but ripped: no. I have a big glowy flashback in my film but I don't think it was ripped-off from anywhere I've only now realised the similarities between my film and theres.

So yeah, I guess you have a much stricter rip-off policy. smile

"ok i think i may just take k-text of this site. it first got good ratings, and now people are saying the same thing, and they are things i already menchend in the submission. guys Guess what i know i did not have good actors, becuase they are my friends, what a suprize!"

Take it easy, look how many bad reviews you've got, I can't remember reading hardly any. People like this film, it's hardly as if it's "Gigli 2: Electric Bogaloo" is it?

And hardly any films on here have great perfomances 'cos there's no pro actors in most. But just because they're not pro's doesn't mean they're good perfomances that can't be criticised. Any part of a film that is shown to such a wide variety of people is throwing itself open for criticism. I don't have any pro actors in my film, so I expect people to criticise it, what am I gonna do? I'm just winging it with what I've got, and people are gonna complain but they understand that Dustin Hoffman wasn't available for our little films, but that don't make the acting good and unassailable.

Besides we can try to get better perfomances out of them as directors, and whichever way you look at it "more information... on... my father's... death." was delivered very badly.
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even if it has parts which are just total ripoffs of MechaForce and Sidewinder's work, and though even though at these parts they provided the ideas and inpsiration, You still carried them out and edited them pretty effectively.
I didn't use ripoff in that extreme sense, which I thought was pretty obvious. Although in a sense you're right, you could just called them heavy influences or inspirating(sp?) factors.

Two_Gunned_Saints above post pretty much hits the mark wink
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well let me just say this movie was my friends idea (the main actor) and i was just getting kinda mad, becasue people say the same thing. i like critisizen, but when you say the same thing Over and over, i kinda start getting anoyed. i wont take it off, and i relize that it is getting better ratings than any other one of my movies.
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ssjaaron wrote:

well let me just say this movie was my friends idea (the main actor) and i was just getting kinda mad, becasue people say the same thing. i like critisizen, but when you say the same thing Over and over, i kinda start getting anoyed. i wont take it off, and i relize that it is getting better ratings than any other one of my movies.
Criticism is never particuarly easy to take wink Don't worry about it so much, what you're getting on these forums is several different opinions. The fact that in areas they all match up shows you which areas you need to concentrate most on in the future smile
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I was going to say what hybrid was said but then he said it....and...

This was easily your best movie to date, and definetly one of the most ambitious projects I have seen on FXHome in a looong time. (thats 3 o's, so you know it's good) Im not sure if you can understand how refreshing it is to see a good fight scene that isn't art of the saber. I right now am working on a movie that is quite similar to this, and we are trying hard to make our fight scenes something special, something which your's are obviously.

I know you live in utah, and I was wondering where you filmed, especially in the warehouse. I think i recognized some locations

I agree with hybrid on pretty much everything but I didnt think it detracted enough to give this anything but a 5. Cannot wait to see what else you pump out.
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No one has blankly said, "you're movie is shit"
Most of us have given you good and bad comments.

I didn't waste 10 minutes writing about 700 words on your film just to insult you, so I suggest you read it biggrin
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What is with everyone? If this was a crappy movie, or it blatantly had some things which would directly affect you, I would understand such a negative tone. But this movie is good, and so far, I've heard mostly bad things, or slightly good things written with bad inflection.

Lighten up, everyone. You shouldn't always have to point out every particular problem. Sometimes you should just watch a movie to watch it. Especially if it has some cool elements- like this one. My brother and I often give movies a self-analysis while watching them and divide reasons for a movie being good into three separate parts.

The 'Cool' Factor- e.g. the Matrix Reloaded, The Rundown

The 'Complexity of the Story' or 'Well Written' Factor- e.g. Most good pro movies out there, with a couple of exceptions, "Ghost Soldiers" on FXHome is a good example of this

The 'Sense of Depairity' Factor- These movies are ones that are dramatic and emotional, but it's not too overdone. e.g. "Pay it Forward" when Haley Joel Osment is stabbed, practically any episode of the show "Without a Trace", "Enemy of the State" especially the use of sullen, dramatic music during a chase scene.

K-Text is some quality work and, if anything, sets a precedent for fight choreography on FXHome, along with some other admirable elements. Ssjaaron, please don't take this off. Forget what nay-sayer are saying and think to yourself, 'Is this movie bad, are they right?' And I think you'll find that they are in fact wrong.
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ben3308 wrote:

What is with everyone? If this was a crappy movie, or it blatantly had some things which would directly affect you, I would understand such a negative tone. But this movie is good, and so far, I've heard mostly bad things, or slightly good things written with bad inflection.

Lighten up, everyone. You shouldn't always have to point out every particular problem. Sometimes you should just watch a movie to watch it. Especially if it has some cool elements- like this one. My brother and I often give movies a self-analysis while watching them and divide reasons for a movie being good into three separate parts.

The 'Cool' Factor- e.g. the Matrix Reloaded, The Rundown

The 'Complexity of the Story' or 'Well Written' Factor- e.g. Most good pro movies out there, with a couple of exceptions, "Ghost Soldiers" on FXHome is a good example of this

The 'Sense of Depairity' Factor- These movies are ones that are dramatic and emotional, but it's not too overdone. e.g. "Pay it Forward" when Haley Joel Osment is stabbed, practically any episode of the show "Without a Trace", "Enemy of the State" especially the use of sullen, dramatic music during a chase scene.

K-Text is some quality work and, if anything, sets a precedent for fight choreography on FXHome, along with some other admirable elements. Ssjaaron, please don't take this off. Forget what nay-sayer are saying and think to yourself, 'Is this movie bad, are they right?' And I think you'll find that they are in fact wrong.
As usual, a post void of any use and rather obviously not taking into account any previous posts.

I would not say that any great deal of tone is negative, and people post movies on here to get the public's opinion or more precisely, to get the opinions of fellow fxhome users. And that's what he got.

You'd have to be either a total fool or absolutely kidding yourself if you were to think that this movie was perfect, and we're highlighting what is not absolutely top about it so that it can be improved upon. I really shouldn't need to hammer that into anyone.

The ratings for ssj's movie speaks for itself, it's good entertaining stuff, and by telling him what isn't great about it, I'm making an investment, I'm making sure that his next movie is even more enjoyable.

If you can't handle that, then I suggest you naff off wink
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thanks guys for you goodcomments, lol. i was not in a very good mood this morning.also we had a premire at my house, this last friday, with like 200 people show up, they all seemed to love it.
well i am sorry fxhome for being in a bad mood.
i hope to just see what happens when i enter this into a film festival.

Waser: the locations where down by Ganeva steel. do know where that is?
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Hybrid-Halo wrote:


As usual, a post void of any use and rather obviously not taking into account any previous posts.

I would not say that any great deal of tone is negative, and people post movies on here to get the public's opinion or more precisely, to get the opinions of fellow fxhome users. And that's what he got.

You'd have to be either a total fool or absolutely kidding yourself if you were to think that this movie was perfect, and we're highlighting what is not absolutely top about it so that it can be improved upon. I really shouldn't need to hammer that into anyone.

The ratings for ssj's movie speaks for itself, it's good entertaining stuff, and by telling him what isn't great about it, I'm making an investment, I'm making sure that his next movie is even more enjoyable.

If you can't handle that, then I suggest you naff off wink
i totally agree
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ssjaaron, if you read more carefully many people have said that despite their comments they still really enjoyed your film.

Now I'll admit, there were some things that stood out, but apart from that... it was an awesome film mate. Your bullet time and action sequences looked really good, and some great fighting too.
Can I make one suggestion, you're probably going to dislike it...

I suggest you re-edit the beggining of the film, and just tidy up some bits before the film festival. Just try to remove the camera rolling noise in the beggining and it'll sound much better. Also, keep the whole film widescreen (otherwise it looks inconsistant) by applying black bars to the whole thing.

Your promo was sweet. Get your friends togethor and do an action loaded short with a simple plot. It's the best way to get people to go "wow" biggrin
For example, a bunch of terrorists invade a warehouse to steal a certain something, but are unaware that they're being expected... I know that sucks, but something like that.

Go on!!! An action loaded short would be so cool. I'll look forward to your future offerings.
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Hybrid-Halo wrote:


As usual, a post void of any use and rather obviously not taking into account any previous posts.
That's not a fair statement, but it could be said for you as well, Hy. wink
Regardless, both sides of this semi-argument are somewhat right. Therefore, I must use my classic statement of:

Amen to everyone, now shut up! (I say it to myself quite often, too. lol)
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ssjaaron wrote:


well i am sorry fxhome for being in a bad mood.
i hope to just see what happens when i enter this into a film festival.

Waser: the locations where down by Ganeva steel. do know where that is?
Dont worry about it man, we all get in those moods, especially when we feel that something we have obviously worked very hard on is threatened critically. Make sure to tell me what film festival you enter it in, because I may just see you there.

never heard of Ganeva steel. I take it that it is outside of slc. I rarely ever leave my city's borders. I thought I recognized some of the neighborhood locations though.
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Good stuff, ssjaaron. Been meaning to post about this for a while. I watch every single movie at FXhome before it goes up, and it's always a pleasure to watch a relatively long movie and be entertained throughout. The action in particular jumped out at me - the choreography of the actors and the camera in the action sequences was impressive and gave it a real punch.

As has been said, don't let the negative comments get to you. Pretty much all the negative criticism here has come from people who still really, really enjoyed the movie. The fact that so many people have written really long critiques of the movie show that they can truly identify some real potential in there - they wouldn't have bothered to write so much otherwise.

Often, the better the film the harsher the reviews. And because this was really rather good, people tend to examine it more closely - because we want to give you tips to get even better on the next project. When you see potential, you want to help it get to where it's going.

Best of luck with the festival - be sure to let us know how it all goes. I reckon you have a good chance, especially if you have time for a few last-minute tweaks as suggested above.

Looking forward to your next project.
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thanks tarn! wink
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THIS TOOK YOU A YEAR?


tard
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Good effort. You're getting better.
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THIS TOOK YOU A YEAR?
Some people... Do you have something called A BRAIN?

I don't think people appreciate how long it takes students to make these movies, especially with lots of school work and friends who mess around when trying to film.
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I bet choreographing the fights alone took a good ammount of time
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Misunderestimated wrote:

THIS TOOK YOU A YEAR?


tard
Sorry, but go screw yourself. That was dumb, people have a thing I like to call a life. As a kid in highschool, its pretty much all work, no film. He's lucky he accomplished this in that short amount of time, going to locations, gathering friends, grading, and other post work. Maybe you're not a kid and don't remember what it's like.
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In fact, I'm actually really impressed he DID complete it.

I've tried stuff like this in the past, and it has never worked... We allways just gave up. Without trying to hurt any feelings, I think aaron promises the best stuff from the younger fxhomers. I can't wait for his next biggrin
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Misunderestimated wrote:

THIS TOOK YOU A YEAR?


tard
Yes. Wow! Look! Your retarded question was answered! Now go screw yourself. I think this film is awesome. And, being in highschool myself, I too know that it is truly IMPOSSIBLE to get people togethere and film done. While your thinking: "Wow, these kids spent a year on this?!?!??!?", what you aren't realizing is that many of them were probably reluctant to film, since climate, time, and interest can get a crew sidetracked. It's basically probably like this:
-Aaron tries his best to get people together
-He tries as hard as he can to keep people interested in filming
-People lose interest, but he keeps on
-Filming is done, but he still has a crapload of post to do
-He has arses like you say that crap to him

I'm not positive this is exactly how it is, but that comment was unecessary, nevertheless.

EDIT: this is where I wish I had my "rate-down" button....
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heh, I think we scared him off... razz
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Atom, unless this is ben, you do.
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Serpent wrote:

Atom, unless this is ben, you do.
actually, no, this IS Atom, but I REALLY don't have a "rate-down" button. confused
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Yes. Wow! Look! Your retarded question was answered!
roflmao! biggrin
that was very funny!

anyway i understand its not easy to create a movie like that, especially if you dont have such 3D video-editing programs or stuff like this.
your movie has been a VERY big experience for you, so keep going this way!
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Perfect.
5 Stars.
Top Ten Place.

No more to say.

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Perfect?

......I dont really need to say anymore, as i think the overdramatic statement stands on its own for proving some people will say anything to appear agreeable. or i could just be wrong, which would lead me to wonder if redhawk has ever seen any budgetless films that contained original ideas, music, good acting..etc...

Hate to be a killjoy, but sometimes i just gotta
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Bryce007 wrote:

Perfect?

......I dont really need to say anymore, as i think the overdramatic statement stands on its own for proving some people will say anything to appear agreeable.
Well, I don't think he was trying to be agreeable because you just controdicted him which is not agreeing in this case. Also, it was exaggerating on purpose, but in his eyes it could have been perfectly entertaining, or perfectly nailed by a kid of that age. Beause nothing in the world is really perfect. Just my thoughts. Redhawk?
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...perfectly nailed by a kid of that age.
Yeah, that was what I meant. Since me and ssjaaron are almost the same age (ssjaaron is 2 years older), I was stunned since I couldn't have thought of anything this good. But who knows, maybe some time I will...
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Redhawksrymmer wrote:

Serpent wrote:

...perfectly nailed by a kid of that age.
Yeah, that was what I meant. Since me and ssjaaron are almost the same age (ssjaaron is 2 years older), I was stunned since I couldn't have thought of anything this good. But who knows, maybe some time I will...
Well, then so may I....

Hawk: Dude, your barely 14, and ssjaaron is nearly 17. You more like 3 years younger than him. But that's besides the point. Btw, Aaron, can you send me a list of the songs used in K-Text? (If its not too much to ask) I'm trying to see if I can snag any of em' off iTunes. wink
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i used songs from metal gear solid, 1 and 2. i used alot of Hans zimmer songs.
ok here are the songs names
1:Fundementum (song from adreinlene)
2:Faint (lincoln park)
3:Interjection (Hans zimmer)
4:Prelude (we were soldiers, by hans zimmer)
5:Main title (The Hulk, Hans Zimmer)
6:Memoires (Maarten Spuijt)
7:Night (Hans Zimmer)
8:Discovery (metal gear solid)
9: Cry in silence (hans Zimmer)
10:Metal Gear Solid 2
11:some fighting matrix song
12:In Our Woods (Maarten spuijt)
13Burning Whiskey (Maarten Spuijt)
14:What is fight club (the dust brothers)
15:Why, Mr. Anderson? (OST)
16: SYDmaster2 (soundfreeks)
Posted: Fri, 1st Oct 2004, 3:02pm

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You missed MUSE - TIME IS RUNNING OUT (Your credit music) biggrin

Me likes MUSE (British Band)
Posted: Fri, 1st Oct 2004, 8:36pm

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thank you tap2
Posted: Fri, 8th Oct 2004, 3:25am

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im sorry for that reply before....i just realized it now.....that was my friend and co-filmmaker who has my password....hes kind of a jerk....
Posted: Fri, 8th Oct 2004, 3:39am

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its cool wink
Posted: Sun, 10th Oct 2004, 7:08pm

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Nicely done. I can see what you mean about have an incidental soundtrack. Great work with AlamDV and Chromanator

I'm not sure if you intended the film to have the bright, white-washed color during the outdoor shots, but that can be adjusted with shutter-control, if you have it.

Minor nitpicking:

-- I noticed two shots where there were "extras" in the background, but we've all made that mistake as far as keeping folks not involved in the shot out of it.

-- When you protagonist was dodging the bullets in part three, you could have used a mask so that when he turned one way, that one bullet passed on the other side of him.

Your strongest point: a very good, and solid story. It's better than most of the stories here.

Keep on keepin' on!

-- Jay
Posted: Sun, 10th Oct 2004, 7:19pm

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Gee whiz kids...That bullet dodging scene was similar to another movie ive seen...cant recall...keanu...hmm..maybe i'll remember later
Posted: Mon, 11th Oct 2004, 1:36am

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haha bryce....

hey , the locations were nicely picked. I know how hard it is to find a place whre u can use guns in public. the muzzle flashes were really nice.

awsome job, i gotta a few tips- just suggestions BUT dont let them think u were bad
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- add whiffs!! the fhighting parts have the actual HIT sound, but ur missing the whiff" sound bit

- with the warehouse fight scene, the music ending was kind of anti-climatic. the techno was hot tho

- some times the smoke got a little too repetitive. And when u see the same smoke effect over and over looking the same, it takes away the realism.


The part where u snipe the soldier is freaking sweet. Its the metal gear 1 stealth music that really sets it off.


Im in high school, and i know how hard it is to get ur friends to shoot and not mess around. It took u a year to film 20 min, which is not bad.

There was one kick what was REALLY nice. It was in the warehouse, whre u kick the guy in the mask and u do this round-house thing...it was really nice.

Can u tell me how u did the explosion with the house? the lighting was nice.
My screename is : IpackDaHeat
Posted: Tue, 12th Oct 2004, 1:12am

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dam wtf did i vote, that should be a 4, mistake
Posted: Sat, 16th Oct 2004, 10:41pm

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I'd really like to work with you Aaron, if only I were in the US.
( we're the same age biggrin )
Posted: Sat, 16th Oct 2004, 11:04pm

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i would love to work with you to tap2. if you ever come to america tell me. wink
Posted: Mon, 18th Oct 2004, 9:40pm

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Will Do... biggrin

You're lucky thought as you've got so many places to film.
Posted: Tue, 19th Oct 2004, 3:58am

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we had a premire at my house, this last friday, with like 200 people show up
Dam... you house can hold that many people? Anyways, the movie was pretty good. The oooonly thing that bugged me a lil was the fight choreography/and choreography editing. Remember to always keep it CONSISTENT. An example would be in part one at 03:42 the guy gets knocked against the wall, and his head is pretty low to the ground. Now look at his positioning at the cut right after. His back is up agains the wall and hes already getting up. Also right after he gets up his arms are at his sides, then the cut right afterwards his hands are in a fighting stance and he starts goin at it. Also keep in mind of the 180 deg rule at times. Not all fight scenes have to abide by this but in your case it does some times. Lets go back to where we left off in the fight. Around 03:47 when they are goin at fast hand to hand. The cut right after is on the other side of the two when the guy in the t shirt throws an over head jab and the guy in the cut-offs ducks it. This can be confusing (well it was to me) because both guys pretty much look the same. If they were wearing 2 noticably diff outfits and looked diff, then i wouldnt have a prob with this cut. But since they look a lot alike, i was confused.

A good way to sell your fight scenes is when you cut at a specific move make sure, on the next shot, to start about 2 moves before that so that it will flow much better. I would post an example but for some reason my hosting site is down right now. If anyone could host a 1.3mb file for me really quick that would be great. Anyways, im not trying to bash your film at all, so dont take this the wrong way. Im just giving you a few pointers on how to sell your fights even more.

-Chris[/i]
Posted: Tue, 19th Oct 2004, 8:54pm

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Here is an example of what im talking about.

http://fxhome.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=145614#145614

Thanks to mantra for helpin me out.

-Chris

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Posted: Tue, 19th Oct 2004, 9:32pm

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that was AWSOME CX3 i love watching other peoples fight coreyography
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Posted: Tue, 19th Oct 2004, 9:40pm

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Thanks man, we shot that over the summer trying to come up with some concept shots for our movie were workin on right now and also for x3i.
Posted: Sun, 6th Mar 2005, 8:16pm

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What's the name of that soundtrack that goes like: Romulus, domolus. You know, the intro song. It's quiet cool, I want to use it 2. Cause I want 2 make a fighting scene in a church razz cool

And by the way, I love your movie. Every friend of my has seen it, and they have the same opinion.

Keep on doing good work !!!


Greetz.
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Posted: Sun, 6th Mar 2005, 9:51pm

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"Fundamentum" by Lesium. From the album "Mystic Spirit Voices"
Posted: Mon, 7th Mar 2005, 5:57pm

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rrfproductions wrote:

What's the name of that soundtrack that goes like: Romulus, domolus. You know, the intro song. It's quiet cool, I want to use it 2. Cause I want 2 make a fighting scene in a church razz cool

And by the way, I love your movie. Every friend of my has seen it, and they have the same opinion.

Keep on doing good work !!!


Greetz.
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...sounds like the credits music from Matrix Revolutions..... dont know.
Posted: Tue, 8th Mar 2005, 12:32am

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Thanks everyone for the great comments. I am glad to hear majority of you enjoyed it. i know it is not the best and i am positive you will all enjoy my next film i submit. i hope all of your questions are answered, and agian THANK YOU! smile
PS: If you guys want go check out initial-productions new web design, it ROCKS!
Posted: Tue, 8th Mar 2005, 2:24am

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Aaron, just looked at the thread and wanted to congratulate you on K-Text again. Brilliant movie, very ambitious. 5/5, to restate what I said last year shortly after its release.

Initial productions new layout is cool. Your old one was good, but this one's better.

Keep up the good work, man!
Posted: Tue, 8th Mar 2005, 2:36am

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did K-Text win anything?
Posted: Tue, 8th Mar 2005, 3:04am

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Speaking of K-text....Im wondering if you want to let me try and remake it?
Posted: Tue, 8th Mar 2005, 3:18am

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i would love if you made a remix!
oh and about the film festival, we decieded not to enter being that none of the music was not ours. but i am learning how to make my own music which is cool. agian i would love if someone would make a remake, i hope it would be even better than mine, good luck guys.
oh and relize we had no script it was just me and my buddies freestyling. hehe smile
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Posted: Thu, 23rd Mar 2006, 10:06am

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Wow that is sum great stuff . great story line and great fighting scenes. i have joined the 3 parts together for next time i watch it biggrin