loved, loved, loved the opening! The wall was very well done. Very much improved. I liked the music and the FX.
A couple of improvement tips (take with a grain of salt and I am trying to keep in mind the same things)
1. The people watching the film don't know what is going to happen.
So, make it easy for people like
so they don't go
and instead go
I lost who was the cyborg. An easy fix would be have the good guy in white and bad in black.
2. The music cut out strangely.
3. Very dark in spots.
Little fixes but I liked very much! Keep up the good work.