Humans Vs Robots
Posted: Thu, 5th Mar 2009, 3:40pm
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|In 2040 the robots has declare war against the humans, but the humans won't let them take over the world...|
Made it with only my brother and my camera
Edited with Final Cut Pro 6 and EffectsLab Pro.
Please comment and tip me for improvements!
Hope you enjoy my movie!
Posted: Fri, 6th Mar 2009, 3:36am
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Very well made, good sound effects and camera angles. A few things the improve on might be to add shadow/ash pile after to explosions, otherwise it doesn‘t look real. Apart form that it was great.
I liked your 180 pan of the actors on the ground, very well sot and masked. I also liked the sound effects you gave to the "vertically challenged" robot.
Posted: Fri, 6th Mar 2009, 4:33am
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Well done! I really liked the music. Music is over looked alot in small films. Sound effects were great also. Great use of angles too.
Just keep making movies, you'll get better with each one!!!
Posted: Fri, 6th Mar 2009, 8:29am
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John the robot was bad-ass!
Hope you don't mind me saying so but the blood was a tad bit off "grading, and color" but everything else was so right on. Great, great job!
There's nothing, I mean nothing better than robots fighting humans. Danger Will Robinson, danger!
Posted: Fri, 6th Mar 2009, 12:28pm
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Posted: Fri, 6th Mar 2009, 3:56pm
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i am really sorry you feel offended but you must allow me to give my opinion, the robot was effective and the muzzle flashes were realistic but why you gave my a -1 i do not know
Last edited Sun, 8th Mar 2009, 10:39am; edited 2 times in total.
Posted: Fri, 6th Mar 2009, 3:59pm
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it is still good !
Posted: Fri, 6th Mar 2009, 4:01pm
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You know what we keep telling you about double posting and using the 'edit' button, ricam?
Posted: Sat, 7th Mar 2009, 10:37pm
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I fucking love this film!!!
Posted: Sun, 8th Mar 2009, 12:01am
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Tarn wrote:You know what we keep telling you about double posting and using the 'edit' button, ricam?
Posted: Sun, 8th Mar 2009, 4:28pm
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Thanks for you comments!
Just wondering if you see that the movie is jumping over frames? can you see that the muzzle flashes aren't flashing correct, like in the beginning when the robot is shooting from only one hand, but infect I made flashes on both? It wasn't like that before I uploaded it to YouTube.
Or is just me?
Posted: Mon, 9th Mar 2009, 9:58am
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The missing muzzle flashes might be due to deinterlacing. If your source was interlaced, it's possible that the muzzle flashes existed only on single fields. If YouTube then deinterlaced the footage, it might have dumped that field.
Posted: Mon, 9th Mar 2009, 12:06pm
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it's really good I just say maybe work on the fire and blood
Posted: Mon, 9th Mar 2009, 4:45pm
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it's strange because when I'm watching the movie on my iPod Touch on youtube it doesn't jumps over frames, it looks great! Maybe because of smaller screen ?
Posted: Mon, 9th Mar 2009, 4:48pm
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The iPhone and iPod Touch use different video files to normal computers, so it's possible that they were encoded using slightly different tactics.
Posted: Mon, 9th Mar 2009, 5:14pm
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Ok, well I don't won't to export and upload it again so I will just remember it to the next time I upload a movie.
In Final Cut Pro there is two options when I'm exporting, interlaced and progressive, will I choose progressive next time to not having the same problem?
Posted: Fri, 13th Mar 2009, 4:59am
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THRILLA!!! THRILLA BABY!
Posted: Fri, 13th Mar 2009, 7:19pm
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ok i thought the sound effects were awesome your music was awesome and the effects... AWESOME! this movie was... you guessed it AWESOME! i liked it. keep up the good work
Posted: Fri, 13th Mar 2009, 8:44pm
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Awesome! Music and all. A couple of the effects look a bit pasted, but hey, it's better than I've done yet.
Posted: Fri, 20th Mar 2009, 2:47pm
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thats kool....really intertaining....what program did you use to do your to do your movie title intro?
Posted: Fri, 20th Mar 2009, 5:34pm
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I made the inro text with final cut pro 6
Posted: Mon, 23rd Mar 2009, 12:25am
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Love the dust explosions after the shots that hit the ground.
Posted: Tue, 4th Aug 2009, 10:07pm
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How did u do the bullet ricotchets and bullet trails?
Posted: Tue, 4th Aug 2009, 10:24pm
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How did you make the bullet ricotchets and the bullet trails/
Posted: Wed, 5th Aug 2009, 7:06am
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I have just shown it to my kids in the hope it inspires them.
Posted: Wed, 5th Aug 2009, 9:27pm
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You can get get the bullet ricotchets and the bullet trails here: http://www.detonationfilms.com/Stock_Directory.html
It's a nice website with real effects and many of them is for free !
Then you need to put the effects into your movie with chroma-key and choose the color of the background of the effect.
Please ask me for more information if you need !
Thanks, and I hope they enjoy my movie TemporalCoder !
Posted: Wed, 5th Aug 2009, 10:43pm
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Sound effects and visuals where pretty good. And some of the cinematography wasn't that bad either. The only problem I had was how he killed the robot. It seemed a little... well... not epic
. Other then that it was good for the most part.
Posted: Thu, 31st Dec 2009, 2:59am
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This was very good. Keep making films like this!