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I would like suggestions and oppinoins on it. Give yourself some time to read it because it was over 18 pages on microsoft word. It's not very detailed just to let you know.
Scene description: Oscar is flying through space in his space ship.
Oscar is flying through space and runs into Johnny.
Oscar quickly presses a button on his control panel.
Johnny appears in the seat next to Oscar lifelessly.
Oscar: oh my.
Oscar has a horrified look on his face.
Oscar listens to Johnny’s heart.
Oscar (scared): oh no.
Oscar grabs a tube and puts it in Johnny’s mouth.
Johnny (awakingly): ahh.
Johnny looks around surprised.
Johnny (surprised): where am I?!
Oscar: you’re in my space ship.
Johnny looks at Oscar.
Johnny: who are you?
Oscar (proudly): I’m Oscar, the Oscar, the famous Oscar th…
Johnny (surprised): You’re the Oscar?
Oscar (proudly): Yes.
Johnny: I don’t think I’ve ever herd of you.
Oscar looks confused and insulted.
Oscar: who are you?
Johnny: I’m Johnny.
Oscar: What were you doing out there.
Johnny thinks for a second.
Johnny nodes his head side-to-side
Johnny (having a hard time remembering): I don’t know.
Oscar: I’m sure if you come to my house and have glass of brandy you’ll remember in no time.
Johnny (as if he was not listening): Oh yes, certainly.
Outside view: Oscar’s space ship flies towards Gariton until it is out of site.
Outside view: Oscar’s space ship lands on the ground.
Oscar and Johnny get out and walk inside.
Oscar hands Johnny a glass of brandy.
Johnny: Fine house you’ve got here.
Oscar: It’s quite old.
Johnny: I know!
Oscar (surprised): You do?
Johnny (just remembering): I was in an imperial star ship. They ejected me into space and then I ended up in your space ship.
Oscar: Do you remember why they did it.
There’s a knock at the door.
Oscar: Let me get that.
Oscar goes to the door and opens it and sees an imperial guy.
Oscar slams the door and locks it. He runs back to where Johnny is sitting.
Oscar: I think we have an uninvited guest.
Johnny (as if he where not listening): What?
Oscar: It’s an imperial trooper.
Johnny looks at Oscar alarmed.
Johnny: What! Don you have a weapon?!
Oscar: Yes, I have a light saber.
Johnny: Well where is it?
Oscar: It’s over next to the door lying on the ground.
They hear the door brake down.
The imperial guy steps on the light saber and it turns on.
The imperial guy points his gun at the light saber and walks a few steps back.
The imperial guy shoots the light saber and the light saber reflects the bullet witch shoots back and hits the imperial guy.
Johnny and Oscar run to the door. There they see the imperial guy on the ground.
Oscar looks at Johnny.
Oscar (amused): That was dumb on his behalf.
Johnny (amused): ha.
Oscar: What do you think he wanted?
Johnny: I don’t know. Wait I do! The imperial guys shot me into space because I wouldn’t give something they wanted.
Johnny snaps twice.
Johnny: What was it?
Oscar: Do you still have it?
Johnny: oh yah.
Johnny pulls a piece of paper-like substance out of his pocket.
Johnny gives Oscar the piece of paper-like substance.
Oscar: These are plans for some sort of weapon that creates the chemical formula -A7339.
Oscar: That’s the opposite of Gariton’s formula A7339, and that mean….
Johnny: Wait, what’s Gariton.
Oscar: this planet.
Johnny nodes his head.
Oscar: And as I was saying, if they have the chemical formula -A7339.
Oscar looks at Johnny horrified.
Oscar: they can create a nuclear reaction with Gariton.
Oscar: Johnny, I think you’ve just saved this planet.
Johnny: so that all comes down to the fact that there’s something on Gariton that the empire doesn’t like.
Oscar: yes, but what?
Johnny: Why would they shoot me out into space if they want something I have?
Oscar: There’s a reason why the empire nearly got wiped out.
Johnny: Is there anything special on Gariton.
Oscar: Well, there’s a pretty good museum in Hetty’s Burg.
Johnny: What kind of museum is it?
Oscar: Natural history.
Johnny: I shouldn’t think the empire is against natural history.
Oscar: The princess lives on Gariton.
Johnny: oh, does she?
Oscar: I think we should pay the princes a visit.
Scene description>outside view: Oscar’s car drives past the camera.
They arrive at the princess’s palace and walk in.
Oscar: princess! Are you home?! It’s me Oscar!
Johnny: You know her?
Oscar: Yes. I know the princes pretty well
Johnny: Maybe see’s out.
Oscar looks at his watch.
Oscar: As a matter of fact I am suppose to be here in 15 minutes, and she’s always very organized.
Johnny looks at a burnt trail on the floor.
Oscar looks at the trail.
Oscar: It’s a radiation trail. It looks like one left by a stun gun.
Oscar: I think the princess has been kidnapped.
Johnny: But by who?
Oscar (smart Alec): Who do you think?
Johnny: The Empire!
Johnny: What should we do?
Oscar (rudely): We?
Oscar: I suggest that I should go and get her.
Johnny: I could come with you.
Johnny: I know where the imperial ships are.
Oscar: Okay. I suppose you can come.
Scene description: Oscar and Johnny are flying through space in Oscar’s space ship.
Johnny: The imperial ships are over at 283 degrees south and 37 degrees north.
Computer: Destination recorded.
Johnny: How do you know which space ship to look in.
Oscar (aggravated): We’ll cross that bridge when we get there.
Computer: Do not worry; he’s usually in this mood.
Johnny (super aggravated): ahhh
Johnny presses a button on his control panel.
It ketches on fire.
Oscar (aggravated): Oh Baloney!
Johnny: What happened?!
Oscar grabs a fire extinguisher and puts out the fire.
Johnny: wow that was close.
Oscar: I think our troubles are just beginning.
Oscar: We’re stationary.
Johnny (worried): Oh no.
Outside view: Oscar’s space ship is floating around in space.
Johnny (worried): What do we do?
Oscar: We’ll have to fly to the nearest planet or another landable place with the jet packs.
Johnny: That sounds dangerous.
Oscar: You can’t live your life in a science fiction environment if you’re not willing to take any risk.
Scene description: Oscar and Johnny are flying through space with there jet packs.
Johnny: I think one of our star ships are close to here.
Oscar: Johnny, Where going backwards.
Johnny surprised: How!?
Oscar: A tractor beam. And a better question, why?
Johnny: It’s probably an imperial ship.
Johnny looks behind himself.
Johnny: is it just me or is it getting hotter and there’s a star in our general direction
Oscar looks behind himself.
Oscar: It’s no tractor beam pulling us, we’re in the gravitational pull of a star!
Oscar: I guess gradually burning up isn’t the worst for of death.
Johnny: We’re not going to die, look.
Oscar and Johnny look and see Oscar’s space ship floating towards the star.
Oscar (excited): We can hook the jet packs up to the battery and we might be able to get enough power to pull away from the star!
Johnny and Oscar (struggling) fly towards Oscar’s space ship.
Oscar hooks up a cable from the jet packs to the battery.
Oscar and Johnny wait a few seconds.
Oscar: That should do the trick. Hopefully.
Oscar unhooks the cables.
Oscar and Johnny (struggling) fly away from the star.
Scene description: Oscar and Johnny are flying through space.
Johnny stops going and Oscar and the camera keep going.
Oscar stops and turns around.
Oscar flies to where Johnny is.
Johnny: My jetpacks stopped working.
Three imperial ships appear.
Johnny: This is rather convenient.
Oscar nodes his head side to side.
Oscar: I really don’t see how it could get any worse.
Johnny: Don’t you see. These are the imperial command ships.
Oscar: ohh, that’s real reassuring.
Johnny: The princess is probably in one of these ships.
Oscar: Oh, I see. But we’re still in quite a tight spot. Lets just hope that they decide to bring us aboard instead of killing us now.
Johnny looks at Oscar.
Johnny: You’re not a very positive person.
The command ship’s gun begins to fire and explodes.
Johnny (surprised): What happened?!
Oscar: The gun malfunctioned.
Oscar and Johnny appear in one of the command ships.
Johnny: Maybe we get into a lot of bad situations, but I must admit, we to have some good luck.
An imperial fighter walks up to Oscar and Johnny.
Oscar: We’re still not in the easiest situation.
Imperial fighter (seriously): Come on.
The imperial fighter is taking Oscar and Johnny through a hall.
Oscar falls down on his knees.
Oscar (in pain): Ahhh
The imperial fighter looks at Oscar.
Johnny jumps on the imperial fighter and pulls him to the ground.
Oscar grabs and pulls the gun out of the imperial fighter’s hand.
Oscar changes the setting on the gun to stun and shoots the imperial fighter.
Oscar: Come on.
Oscar and Johnny run down the hall.
Scene description: Oscar and Johnny are in the computer room.
Johnny: What do we do now?
Oscar pulls an instrument out of his
Oscar: I can use this instrument to read the computer.
Johnny: So that will tell us where the princess is?
Oscar: If she’s in this ship.
Oscar: There’s no record of her in this ship. But it does say something about the commander giving an order to capture the princess and bring her to ship A.
Johnny: Does it say witch ship ship A is?
Oscar pulls the instrument out of the computer.
Johnny: Are the imperial guys real.
Oscar: What do you mean, of course there real.
Johnny: Well, they all look the same.
Oscar: That’s because they’re all cloned from one person, usually the science officer.
Johnny: Do they all look the same?
Oscar: No, the higher ranks aren’t clones.
Johnny: Well then, since they don’t wear uniforms they wouldn’t realize we’re not imperial so we could go to the transporter room and ask them to transport us to ship A.
Oscar looks at Johnny and smiles and gives out a little laugh.
Oscar: Good thinking.
Oscar realizes something.
Oscar: Where’s the transporter room?
Johnny points to the computer.
Johnny: The computer.
Oscar: Oh yes.
Scene description: There is a transporter room with the transporting officer in it.
Oscar and Johnny walk in and walk into the transporters.
Oscar: Beam us to ship A.
The transporting officer presses a few buttons and then pulls something down.
Scene description: The commander is on the bridge with another imperial guy.
There are a few beeps.
Imperial guy: The recently caught prisoners have escaped.
The commander (quietly): I told the distributor I needed uniforms.
The commander presses a button on his control panel.
The commander: Transporting officer.
Transporting officer: Yes?
The commander: have you transported anybody anywhere recently.
Transporting officer: yes sir, I beamed two people to ship A 2 minuets ago.
The commander: You fool, I didn’t give you notice of someone in need of transportation.
The commander presses the button again.
The commander: put all decks on all ships on alert. And put an image of them to.
Imperial guy presses a button.
Scene description: Oscar and Johnny are walking through a hall.
Oscar: So if we can get to the computers I should be able to find where the princess is.
Oscar and Johnny walk past an imperial guy and walk in a door.
The alert starts.
The imperial guy sees it and runs away.
Scene description: Oscar and Johnny are in the computer room.
Johnny: How do you know where the computer rooms are?
Oscar sticks his instrument into the computer
Oscar: every ship has it’s computers in the same place relative to the ship’s shape and size.
The door opens and the princess runs in.
The princess: Come on, let’s get out of here.
Scene description: Oscar, Johnny and the princess are walking through a hall at a fast pace.
Oscar: how did you know we where aboard?
The princess: I saw the alert.
Oscar: oh. Do you have a space ship?
The princess: Yes.
Oscar: What is it that the empire wants?
The princess: I don’t know
Oscar, Johnny and the princess are walking towards a corner.
An imperial guy walks from around the corner.
The princess draws her gun.
The princess: Come on.
5 rebel guys jump out from behind the corner and shoot the three imperial guys.
The princess shoots one of the rebel guys.
One of the rebel guys changes his gun to stun and shoots the princess.
Johnny takes the princess’s gun.
Johnny gets down to see the princess.
Johnny: Well done men.
Rebel guy: What’s wrong with the princess?
Johnny: She’s not the real princess. This is an android.
Oscar: What’s going on?
Johnny: This was all a plan to try and save the princess.
Oscar: What do you have to do with the whole thing?
Johnny: I am count Johnny.
Oscar (exited): Count Johnny. A pleasure to meet you.
Johnny: Just call me Johnny.
Oscar: I guess I should tell you who I am now.
Johnny: No I know, your Oscar rebel science officer.
Oscar: Well then. I guess there’s no need to tell you.
Oscar: Was it planed for me to run into you?
Johnny: No, I was trying to get the plans for the new weapon and I got ejected into space.
Johnny: come on. Let’s find the real princess.
Scene description: The computer room.
Oscar, Johnny and the four rebel guys walk in.
Johnny: We’ll need your computer reading instrument Oscar.
Scene description: Oscar, Johnny and the four rebel guys enter the computer room.
Johnny takes the instrument and puts it in the computer.
Johnny: Let’s see……..
Johnny: She’s been ejected into space.
Johnny: We’ll have to use sensors to locate her.
Oscar: Do you have a ship?
Johnny: Yes. We have a disguised ship waiting for us.
Scene Description: Oscar, Johnny and the four rebel guys are at the end of a hall that leads to the ship hanger.
Johnny: Come on.
Oscar, Johnny and the four rebel guys walk into the ship’s entrance.
The ship takes off.
Scene description: A rebel guy is driving the space ship.
Johnny: Start the sensor scan.
A rebel guy: Yes sir.
Oscar: Why does the empire want to destroy Gariton?
Johnny: The rebel base is on Gariton.
Oscar: I didn’t know that.
Rebel guy: Sir, we found the princess.
Johnny: Good, drive to her location and bring her aboard.
Oscar and Johnny walk out of the room.
Oscar and Johnny walk next to the transporter.
The princess appears lifelessly.
Johnny puts a device on her chest.
The princess wakes up.
Oscar: The princess awakes.
The princess: Oscar, Johnny, were am I?
Johnny: You’re in my ship.
The princess jumps up.
The princess (remembering worried): Is Gariton still in one piece?
Johnny: I have the plans for their weapon so as far as I know Gariton is still in one piece.
The princess: Won’t the empire be looking for us?
Johnny: No, they don’t know were we are.
Oscar is holding up the plans.
Oscar: Johnny, the plans have a chip on them.
Johnny: Then the empire will be looking for us.
Johnny: Come on, let’s go to the bridge.
Oscar, Johnny and the princess walk away from the transporter.
Oscar, Johnny and the princess walk onto the bridge.
A bullet hits Johnny’s space ship.
Johnny walks next to the control seat and the rebel guy sitting there moves and Johnny sits down.
Johnny turns the space ship around.
Johnny’s space ship and the imperial ship are flying towards each other.
The imperial ship is shooting at Johnny’s ship.
Johnny starts shooting at the imperial ship but never hits it.
The imperial ship shoots Johnny’s ship and flies past it.
A few bullets shoot past Johnny’s space ship.
Johnny pulls the throttle back.
The imperial ship flies past them.
Johnny pushes the throttle up again.
Johnny’s ship is catching up with the imperial ship.
Johnny presses the trigger on the joy stick.
A bullet shoots out and hits the imperial ship and the imperial ship explodes.
Johnny: Preparing for jump to light speed.
Johnny’s ship jumps to light speed.
The princess: Where are we going?
Johnny: I don’t know.
Oscar: Why don’t you just destroy the plans instead of running?
Johnny decelerates from light speed
Johnny: Hand them to me.
Oscar hands the plans to Johnny.
Johnny throws the plans in a hole on the control panel.
The plans shoot out in front of Johnny’s ship and Johnny shoots them.
The plans explode largely.
Johnny’s ship flies out of the scene.
Scene description: Oscar, Johnny, the princess and the four rebel people are on the ground of Johnny’s space ship.
Oscar wakes up and sits up.
Oscar: That was stooped.
Oscar gets up and walks to the control panel and presses a button.
A graph appears on the screen.
Chart reading: Engine power 1%
Weapon power 2%
Transporter power 4%
Sensor power 8%
Long distance magnification power 43%
Oscar: Our stupidity was anti-productive.
Oscar pushes a button and the screen changes back to the image of space.
Oscar presses a button.
The screen zooms in and Oscar sees the plans undamaged.
An imperial ship swoops past the plans and grabs them.
Oscar (worried): Oh no. Johnny!
Oscar walks over to Johnny and gives him a nudge.
Oscar: Wake up!
Johnny jumps up
Johnny: The plans must have self destructed.
Oscar: No, I saw the plans on the screen; an imperial ship slew past and grabbed them.
Johnny (surprised): What?!
Johnny: If we don’t get the plans before they make their weapon, the rebel base will be no more.
Johnny goes to the control panel and sits down.
Oscar: The engines are dysfunctional.
Johnny pulls an instrument out his pocket.
Oscar: Is that what I think it is?
Johnny: Yup, it’s the fixer 9000.
Johnny sticks the fixer 9000 in a hole on the control panel.
A few seconds later Johnny pulls the fixer 9000 out of the hole
Oscar: Where are we going?
Johnny: To imperial star ship A.
Oscar: Shouldn’t you summon some help.
Johnny: No, I have an idea.
Johnny presses a button on the control panel.
The ship jumps to light speed.
A few seconds later the ship decelerates from light speed.
Oscar: So what’s your plan?
Johnny: I estimate that the plans reflected my bullet at a force of seven times stronger, so if I shoot a missile at the ship with the plans, it should create an explosion equivalent to the area covered by the three imperial star ships.
Oscar: Good idea, but wont the plans withstand the explosion?
Johnny: Yes, we’ll have to put them in a heavy security safe, and by destroying the star ships they will lose their components and a large number of clones.
Oscar: Wasn’t the commander in there?
Johnny: What do you mean?
Oscar: Well, if the commander dies the empire will be over.
Johnny: That was only the commander of that ship. The superior imperial commander is never in a dangerous place such as a large star ship.
The princess walks up to Oscar and Johnny.
Johnny presses the trigger on the joy stick and a bullet shoots towards the three imperial star ships.
There is a humongous explosion destroying all three star ships.
Oscar: What does this mean?
The princess: It means that the empire is helpless for a wile. And you are now third in command.
Oscar (exited): Thank you.